Script and Changes Added
So originally the script was for a girl and a boy, then changed to three girls, and now MY SISTER'S FRIEND CAN'T DO IT. I've literally asked every single person that I know, and no one could originally be the boy character, so I had changed the script. I then had to change it once again, because I could not find another girl to do it, because my sister's friend bailed the day of. I ended up asking my dear friend Angela to be one of the girls, and thankfully she agreed to do it. Then, I asked my neighbor Trace if he would mind being in the film and was reluctant but he told me that he knows better than to argue with me when I'm so upset and frustrated about this. So I changed the script to two girls and a boy and told the both of them what they should be wearing.
MY SCRIPT:
Thorn Entertainment appears with the Title following
Lachrimae, Willa, Carsen
FIELD AREA WITH WALK WAY
FADE INTO WILLA WALKING OUT ONTO THE BALCONY, APPROACHING THE FIGURE THAT STANDS OUT OVERLOOKING THE VIEW
WILLA: LACHRIMAE, WE’VE DONE WHAT YOU ASKED. BUT I CAN’T HELP BUT WONDER, ARE YOU COMPLETELY SURE YOU WANT TO DO THIS?
LACHRIMAE TURNS TO LOOK AT WILLA;
LACHRIMAE: YES. HE NEEDS TO PAY FOR EVERYTHING THAT HE’S DONE TO ME.
CARSEN APPEARS OUT OF THIN AIR, A FROWN ON HIS FACE;
CARSEN: WE UNDERSTAND THAT, MAE. BUT WE CAN MAKE HIM PAY WITHOUT STOOPING TO HIS LEVEL, CAN’T WE?
WILLA NODS;
WILLA: WE CAN. WE’RE BETTER THAN HE IS.
LACHRIMAE SHAKES HER HEAD WITH A SMALL SMILE;
LACHRIMAE: YOU TWO ARE SO NAIVE. DO YOU HONESTLY THINK THAT LETTING HIM LIVE IS OUR BEST OPTION? HE’S DONE HORRIBLE THINGS, MADE ME DO HORRIBLE THINGS… WHAT MAKES YOU THINK THAT HE WON’T DO IT TO SOMEONE ELSE?!
THE TWO GLANCE AT EACH OTHER BEFORE LOOKING BACK AT LACHRIMAE;
WILLA: MAE…
CARSEN: WE’LL ALWAYS STAND BY YOU AND HELP YOU.
WILLA: NO MATTER WHAT,MAE, YOU KNOW THAT. BUT THAT DOESN’T MEAN THAT WE LIKE IT.
LACHRIMAE NODS AND SMILES;
LACHRIMAE: HE NEEDS TO PAY, HE NEEDS TO BE STOPPED, AND WE’RE GOING TO STOP HIM. EVEN IF WE HAVE TO KILL HIM.
THE TWO LOOK AT EACH OTHER AND NOD BEFORE LOOKING AT LACHRIMAE AND SMILING AT HER GENTLY,CARSEN PLACING A COMFORTING HAND ON HER SHOULDER.
CARSEN: WE’VE GOT YOUR BACK, MAE.